I have decided to reboot my blog. In order to get better at writing, I have to, well, write! The new format will be a combination of fiction and creative nonfiction short stories. Some will be personal, or just observations of the world around me, and some will be light and fun. I hope you’ll stick around to find out and provide great feedback along the way.
One of the things I’m trying is to take a scene from an anime and re-describe the scene in my own way. I’ll give an example. Recently I watched (again) an anime called Vampire Knight. The anime is not what I would consider to be a fast-paced anime, with a lot of emotional scenes. Some of these scenes don’t have a lot of dialog so it’s a lot of internal thoughts of the character and visuals that drive the scene, the emotion, and the tension. What catches me is some of the non-verbal interaction between the characters. There is one scene where the main character, Yuki, turns aware from Zero (one of the main male characters) and he walks up to her from behind and grabs her hands. It is not one of the most intense scenes in the series. In fact it took me forever to even find a fan-made recreation of it on the web. However, there are so many aspects of the physicality of it that intrigue me. I’ve done a quick re-description below, taken out of context and with my own embellishments, so if you’ve seen the anime, know up front the scene won’t quite match.
Yuki turns away, takes a few steps and then stops. Why does he act like this? They’ve lived together for all these years and yet sometimes he could still be so frustrating! He didn’t need to remind her of the way the world fit together between humans and vampires. He especially didn’t need to remind her of what Kaname meant to her.
Without warning, Zero comes up behind her. He slides his hands down her arms to her hands, covering them in his and pulling her back. It throws her off balance a bit and she leans back against his chest to avoid falling over. He starts to lace his fingers in hers but stops.
The silence between them hangs in the air. The only sound is his heavy breathing as he leans over her. She can sense the jumble of emotions vibrating in his chest as she continues to rest her head there. Standing there a few moments and she can feel her frustration fade a bit. It’s comfortable to just stand there with him. If only she knew what was going on, what he was thinking, maybe she could help.
Yuki can feel Zero calming down. Before she can muster any words, he lets go. She doesn’t really hear what he says as he walks away and by the time she turns around, he’s gone. What is this she’s feeling? And what was wrong with Zero? Was everything really going to be okay?
Now, I can tell you I haven’t done the scene justice, and on screen I think it is less than 10 seconds, but I want to be able to take a scene like that and make it have impact. So, time to keep writing! And time to keep watching anime too!
How do you hone your creativity?